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Beautiful Mess
Contributed by
Broncomark12
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 08:50:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Talking gives you no more colors
Lock me up inside your cellars
For my sense sake he needs a barber
He's at it again eh tried to starve her,
One more look I see it sen
Said he wouldn't have never been
Hate is a precious gift you say
Eh wondered off eh gave it away
Never smelled a wilted flower
Never knew a thing about her
I think I hate everything you say
Sen change my mind every single day
Syllababbles for everyone
Smiles and laughs he won't know one
My actions rhyme en makes me sick
Lapping up is every lick
Sen why don't you laugh at me?
Beauty spent is ugly free
Say who sould you sather see?
You hate love and hate loves, be
Since you are beautiful mess
En not deserving any less
Can't distill your upset stomach
There is still I'd rather turn back.
Copyright ©
Broncomark12
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2010-12-21 20:50:59]
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Re: Beautiful Mess
(User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 12:46:12 AM AEST
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I'm confused because i can't seem to figure out whether certain things are intended typos to go along with the idea of it being a beautiful mess or not.
But What i did get from it was pretty decent. |
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Re: Beautiful Mess
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by T-Bear on
Friday, 24th December 2010 @ 04:39:10 AM AEST
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| Your passion comes thru your words..But in some verses,,I wasn't sure what you were trying to say. But it was very strong and I liked it. |
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