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The deception of time
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 08:34:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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In the eyes of the hasty, time it does bind,
Rarely look forward, but never behind,
Throughout this life, a ponderous fate,
There will be love, and there will be hate,
But if you gaze through the eyes of time,
Worry consumes… your world so sublime,
The past… your time… and world …it consumes,
Dreams of the future… are a windowless room,
Time is right here, you can feel it's strong flow,
Don’t let your life linger, time won’t let you go.
So whisper so gently, and take time by the hand,
Show it your love, and how to play in the sand.
This life is not made by destiny or fate,
But by moments in time, we cannot unmake.
Live in the moment… such a turbulent sea,
Let go of time, and set yourself free.
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deusdeira
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2010-12-20 08:34:22]
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Re: The deception of time
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by huwbeauty on
Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 09:09:46 AM AEST
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Brilliant write.The lines"This life is not made by destiny or fate,
But by moments in time, we cannot unmake.
Are so insightful and thought provoking.
Thank you
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Re: The deception of time
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 12:18:37 AM AEST
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| Great point made to live in the moment esp love the last verse stands well within the poem but equally as well on its own well written |
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Re: The deception of time
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 08:45:53 PM AEST
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| oh this flows so good..... |
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