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She pervades my mind.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 06:48:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Brave soldiers of reason,
'tis not the season,
To be asking me questions like that,
Don't call in the morning,
When my thoughts are still forming,
And I'm vulnerable to attack,
But of your request,
I'll have to bequest,
An overall negative feeling,
'cos from where I'm sat,
It's my sub-cncious that,
Sees her and I'm left reeling,
She pervades my mind ,
'til all that I find,
Is that she's part of my being,
So I'll continue to try,
To get on with my life,
Hope in time I'll stop grieving.
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Re: She pervades my mind.
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by deusdeira on
Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 08:59:05 AM AEST
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The thoughts of her,
yes they do stir,
they fill my mind,
and make me blind,
I will unwind,
until a time,
when her soul,
does fill my hole.
haha maybe i'll submit that.
you inspired me :) |
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Re: She pervades my mind.
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by Mexy on
Monday, 20th December 2010 @ 02:50:00 PM AEST
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| Nicely done. I liked the positive outlook at the end. Your words captured your emotions well. |
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Re: She pervades my mind.
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by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 03:07:24 AM AEST
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| Yep, good piece of writing |
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