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Cruel Streets
Contributed by
duff
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Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 04:47:20 PM in AEST
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The graffiti smolders beside a barrel of frowns
Black skies erupt as they try to shelter this moment
Weakened by champagne streets and flying high
Some are so used they can’t comprehend re-entry
Great expectations lost inside a decisions dance
Boulevard parking and sinning against the trust
A baby is born minutes before sliding doors gasp
Bloody knees cross in the struggle to stand tall again
Torn photographs fade as tear drops water reality
Cold and lonely they begin to count the cracks
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by RowenM on
Sunday, 19th December 2010 @ 10:33:47 AM AEST
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This poem instantly made me think in my country's actual social situation.
What a shame!
Good writing, though. Those are some powerful lines over there! |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by huwbeauty on
Sunday, 19th December 2010 @ 02:29:39 PM AEST
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hi duff,
Really liked this,had to come back to it a couple of times to try and unravel your complexities,each line is laden with them.good stuff.
Mat. |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 12:30:46 AM AEST
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| Struggle for survival or even just to stand tall with a view of another kind of life staring you starkly in the face and then there's the dice........ a baby is born minutes before sliding doors gasp....brilliant line powerful in its implication,can feel the soul being eroded away in this,captured by a very talented writer who not only takes you there but immerses you in that world. |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by poeticjestix on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 03:21:34 AM AEST
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| dark and deep.Like a vase full of coffee |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by cashfan1 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 11:00:16 AM AEST
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Hi Duff
this is a very complex piece of writing. It is full of depth of thought and as always you deliver the poem perfectly. Well done and a merry Christmas to you. |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 02:10:07 PM AEST
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I really related to "great expectations lost inside a decisions dance." I really like that line. It is a great way to explain how one feels about indecisiveness and the decisions we must make in life. I also liked "torn photographs fade as tear drops water reality"
Such a true and profound statement. |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 08:47:45 PM AEST
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Well Done
luv the way this one flows...... |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 02:59:30 AM AEST
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This may be because I've been playing zombie games and watching zombie movies but all I see is the survivors in a chicago-style city after it's been torn apart by the infection.
I really adore this poem though. Not for what it means to you, but for the multiple things that it means to me. Not just zombies either. (Though, I feel like most people are mindless zombies aside...) |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by hungarianhaze on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 10:00:14 PM AEST
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| Legit |
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Re: Cruel Streets
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 5th July 2014 @ 04:09:15 PM AEST
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exquisite, raw and so real it breathes, i love
poetry like this, beautiful piece!
hugs n' love nessa
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