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Can barely write.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 03:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Blocked at every turn,
Imagination burns,
A thousand thoughts are seething,
Can barely write I'm reeling.
Recollections so intense,
They only just make sense,
A thousand lives been dreaming,
Can barely write I'm dealing.
Doubts creep in the recess,
Taunt me make me feel less,
A thousand times this evening,
Can barely write I'm feeling.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-18 15:43:14]
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Re: Can barely write.
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by duff on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 04:55:35 PM AEST
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I totally dig this piece. It flows like a song and the lines are awesome. A mind spinning out of control without being able to put it down coherently. This really is a great piece of writing. Well done my friend.
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Re: Can barely write.
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by Ambivalence on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 04:58:50 PM AEST
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You conveyed a lot here, even with your supposed claim. I liked it...
take care
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