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Hers to take.
Contributed by
LovelChelsea
on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 10:03:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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We met at the Haunted House, You and I.
Our eye's met, mind's set, I wanted to cry.
You looked at me, with those beautiful eye's.
Now I found out, that you were telling me lie's.
I see you again, at school the next week.
You look at me again, my knee's get weak.
I walk up to you, and all I can do, is smile and say, a simple hey.
You smile so shyly, and give me this glare.
So I made myself a silly dare.
"I'll make him mine" I say to myself.
I gave it my all, now you call me you're elf!
I'm not that short I say, and you gave me that look.
I smile back, Our love had took.
Were talking now, almost every night.
Now I know, you are my knight.
What I didn't know, was that you were taken.
I stole a kiss, I was so Mistaken.
But it's not all my fault, for you must admit.
You kissed me back, it lasted longer then a minute.
After awhile, a month gone by.
We talked and talked, you're finally mine.
I stole you from her, a bad mistake.
For once you were mine, you were still her's to take.
A love so unfair, I never had a chance.
I tell you to move on, our love won't advance.
You tell me ok, with a simple goodbye.
That's how I know you were telling me lies.
For you told me you loved me, and all I know now.
Is how silly I was, I'll take my vow.
I'll love you in secret, as far as you know.
You'll never be mine again, oh no..
I wont allow you, to hurt me again.
Our love was fake, on you're end.
My love is true, I just want you to know.
That I'll always love you, rain, sleet, or snow. <3
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LovelChelsea
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2010-12-17 22:03:29]
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Re: Hers to take.
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by Dirkj on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 11:53:54 PM AEST
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Re: Hers to take.
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by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 01:31:28 AM AEST
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Nice write,this has a good flow to it.
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Re: Hers to take.
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by jessb3 on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 01:52:30 AM AEST
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| Your poem is so sad but at the same time, so beautiful. Great work! |
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