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A Crush
Contributed by
daniellemarie
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Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 08:43:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It took me only five minutes to become completely and utterly infatuated with
him, the growing hunger in the bottom of my belly. The kind of person you can't
even help but make such a fool out of yourself. The wicked game of temptation
two people who bring out the demons inside one another. The kind of person
you would cheat lie and steal for, kill and be killed just to taste, just for one touch.
What would he do, would he reject me all along? Will it hit me like a bullet?
Too scared to find out, too scared to be denied by such a divine creature.
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2010-12-17 20:43:52]
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Re: A Crush
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 10:59:42 PM AEST
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huh, haven't known this feeling in a long time. Guess i've just grown old and bitter...
not that i'm unhappy with that.
anyway keep writing.
always, abraham |
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Re: A Crush
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by jessb3 on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 01:54:11 AM AEST
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| I remember this crazy, giddy feeling. It's like you become an entirely different person. You worded it well, great work! |
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Re: A Crush
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 06:35:21 AM AEST
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Wow you've just described what happened to me this summer!(unfortunately I was shot down,but some good came of it that's when I started to write).
You've captured the essence of the situation.
Great write.
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