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Perspective.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 03:11:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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The air grows thick with anticipation,
Dark circles betray my desperation,
Sink into a state of my own creation,
Control my nerve regain perspective,
Use my head and be objective,
Then all my pain will be deflected.
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2010-12-17 03:11:06] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Perspective.
(User Rating: 1 ) by JeremySolo on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 03:29:56 AM AEST (User
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I really like the first stanza. You do a great job of pulling the reader into the moment of what you're feeling |
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