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I'm A Boy
Contributed by
Dirkj
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Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 12:00:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I'm a Boy, I'm a Boy, I'm a Boy
I'm wicked
I'm naughty
I'm Jolly
I'm extravagantly over the top
If you mess with me i will hit you in the face
If you love me i will drag you to my place
I Will feed you Tea and Chocolates all day
And
If i misbehave.... sorry folks
I'm a Leo ,
It's not my fault
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2010-12-17 00:00:53]
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Re: I'm A Boy
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by duff on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 12:20:25 AM AEST
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A clever write that is playful and fun for the reader. There is a lightness in the imagery and it's fun to bounce from line to line. Creative and well done.
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Re: I'm A Boy
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by unpredictable on
Tuesday, 11th January 2011 @ 09:42:32 AM AEST
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| i like this..i chuckled |
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