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What You Do
Contributed by
cait
on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 08:45:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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So give me your watch
and smash it into pieces
because not a minute goes by
that I want you to know
there isn't a day
with you not in my mind
like time doesn't exist
becasue when I'm with you
it all stands still
feels like I've known you a lifetime
constantly thinking
how did this happen to me
you came upon me unexpectedly
but I'm so glad that it hapenned
I dont know where I'd be
without you here by my side
It's like we flew into
our cloud of destiny
totally zoned out
when I look into your eyes
I don't hear anyone else
when it's you on my mind
you got me so distracted
I don't know what to do
except,
maybe say,
I love you.
Copyright ©
cait
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2010-12-16 20:45:42]
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Re: What You Do
(User Rating: 1 )
by Anbarean on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 11:18:47 PM AEST
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aaawww so cute.. i like the way you express your love...
Great work
Take care
Anbarean |
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Re: What You Do
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 03:22:49 AM AEST
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| really good write,great but hard work when someones on your mind all the time. |
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Re: What You Do
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by cait on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 07:42:09 PM AEST
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| thanks guys! i love feedback. |
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