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Spontaneous Practice
Contributed by
Ambivalence
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Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 02:21:21 PM in AEST
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It is as if they just come out of nowhere somehow.
From this pen, they seem to naturally find their way on paper.
Like a jigsaw puzzle, I organize them and they fit well together.
I have enjoyed doing this for quite a while now.
I do my best to describe the details
of my current, past, and wishful events.
There are many personal topics at hand
that I very well should and should not mention.
For instance, the things that make me cry
such as heartbreak and onions,
or the things that make me happy
such as fantasy and medications.
Instead of presenting you with a 1000-word essay of boredom,
I would rather write a short interesting poem.
I definitely have so much more to say,
but I will save the next one for another day.
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Ambivalence
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Re: Spontaneous Practice
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by duff on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 11:34:25 PM AEST
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The line about arranging thoughts like a puzzle is something I enjoyed reading. Rearranging until you find that perfect fit and you know it when it happens. It's a weight lifted and gratifying. Very well done.
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Re: Spontaneous Practice
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by hungarianhaze on
Sunday, 26th December 2010 @ 07:27:37 PM AEST
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| Good poem bro ,Poetry is such an amazing thing and to ignore it is a simply...dumb..lol..The last paragraph symbolizes the different uses of poetry..nicely done. |
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Re: Spontaneous Practice
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd July 2014 @ 12:52:54 PM AEST
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beautifully penned, true and absolutely perfect,
hugs n' love nessa |
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