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Hello Insanity

Contributed by fadingaway on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 01:32:27 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract



Wanna say hello? Meet my insanity. The place where my mind breaks my enemy.
Give it some time and you'll see it's true. Hold on honey I'm coming for you!

Where am I supposed to do with all that's in my mind?
Where am I supposed to go a place where I'll be fine?
Who am I supposed to be? Im lost for you to find.
When the demon comes tonight I'll send him home to you.

When my emotional pain became physical
I lost my mind because you were critical
What am I supposed to do when I see you again?
Where am i supposed to go? Is it safe to let you in?

What am i going to be today? Where should I go, or should I stay?
Do I keep myself to me? Or have I sayn' high to insanity?
Either or I know there's an enemy.

Wanna say hello? Meet my insanity. The place where my mind breaks my enemy.
Without this pain there's no one to blame.
I start to realize I should of stayed. Now what am I supposed to do?
Do I stand alone today or do I give my heart to you?
What's it gonna take for me to finally break free?
Am I mistaken or are you my mortal enemy?
Sat hello! Meet my insanity!
The place where my mind breaks my enemy.






Copyright © fadingaway ... [ 2010-12-16 13:32:27]
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Re: Hello Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by duff on Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 09:59:09 PM AEST
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You can feel how chaotic and frantic things are from your bold and intense lines. It has a pace to move the heart and let the adrenaline run for awhile. Thanks for sharing.

duff


Re: Hello Insanity (User Rating: 1 )
by hungarianhaze on Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 08:08:12 PM AEST
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This is wicked awesome i agree with the comment below me..the first lines had me feeling crazy! good job man!




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