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So I Can Write Again
Contributed by
jessb3
on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 06:55:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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That breathless daydream state
My thoughts only of you
My mind was in its element
My pen moved right on cue
My heart needed somewhere
A loving place to go
So I wrote a little poem
And let the feelings flow
They wove a new story
They built a heartfelt rhyme
The endless scrawls upon my page
Completed, every time
But now the past is gone
I sit holding my pen
Wishing that the words will move
So I can write again
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2010-12-16 06:55:30]
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Re: So I Can Write Again
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by DrcGaimer on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 09:57:00 AM AEST
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| excellent, loved it. |
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Re: So I Can Write Again
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 12:59:36 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this in a way! Nicely written! |
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Re: So I Can Write Again
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by DanMWinters on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 04:08:35 PM AEST
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| Ya, that'll happen. Makes you question exactly who writes the poems. |
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Re: So I Can Write Again
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 06:23:28 AM AEST
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| great write so much truth about it, lovely flow also.I wish you could write again also I enjoy your work. |
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Re: So I Can Write Again
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by RowenM on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 09:28:31 AM AEST
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Loved it! =)))
The rhyme is perfect and the meaning is always there.
Like, you don't slip away from it.
Like i said, loved it!! |
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Re: So I Can Write Again
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by DIOGENES on
Thursday, 31st March 2011 @ 07:30:39 AM AEST
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| "The pen of the poet is not moved by the brain, but the heart." |
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