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Your Letter
Contributed by
Dirkj
on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 11:37:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I picked up your Letter again
Yesterday
After so many years,
The spot that your teardrop made,,
Still visible.
Now in the form of a black and purple stain,
Your smell Lingering on,
Just Lingering on
Just Lingering on
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2010-12-15 23:37:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Your Letter
(User Rating: 1 ) by hacktastic on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 11:43:26 PM AEST (User
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Evocative
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Re: Your Letter
(User Rating: 1 ) by DrcGaimer on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 08:11:22 AM AEST (User
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I like this. Although it was short, it still delivers a powerful vision and strong sentiment. The fact that you or the character kept the letter drives those points home. Great job. |
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