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Take a look inside myself

Contributed by hungarianhaze on Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 12:58:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

What happen to what we use to be
When you would never let the light shine out
Taunts let your tears fall into another day
Never sparing a thread of compassion

Caught in your own web
A title with no caption
Just rushing away In to thoughtless action

Look into my eyes
You'll see only stone
Stones that have stacked upoun eachother with hopeless assumptions
The basis to all failure

We had an awesome connection
And now you let it loose with no protection
Every time you cried I was there
Saying " baby Don't leave me I swear"
That you will always stay with me
Now things aint what they used to be
Things went from good , to bad , to worst
Knowing that all I ever did was put you first
You now know that you've left the best
Because when it was time for my love , you failed the test

But still I trugde through your infamouse maze
An actor you seem on a soundless stage
A pre- madoness
Spreading the scent of your own plague
I regret to ask
Was this meant to last
premeditated with such conviction
The ground you stand on
A crowed now lays before you
With sounds of empty claps
With fear daunting , you collapse

I always have empty dreams on how we met
To me a moment that I will never forget
Walking through the grassy garden
I saw you and I said " Excuse me girl I beg my pardon"
I had to stop by because your smile
A beautiful smile I haven't seen in a while
And now I know you don't care
About me and should I ask you " is that fair"

But its too late I gotta move on
Knowing that I need to be strong
Leaving the pain you left in doubt
When you could't find me in the dark
My heart will always send a spark
To light up for you to see
Saying " baby you found me"
As I turn back Theres nothing left
Cause I finally had to take a look inside my self

- Sublime Poetry-

Copyright © hungarianhaze ... [ 2010-12-15 12:58:20]
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Re: Take a look inside myself (User Rating: 1 )
by BeautyKiller on Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 05:08:08 PM AEST
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thats so sad, i feel that it's happened to me before, similarly but not in the same way. ): i feel your pain,

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