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Don't Cry
Contributed by
Dirkj
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Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 10:59:13 PM in AEST
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Don't cry please,
Don't cry,
Everytime you do a Flower dies,
A dark cloud covers the Sun,
The Moon hang his head in shame,
The Stars don't come out to play,
And somewhere far far away
A Butterfly change it's course,
Just to be close to you,
To sit on your shoulder and wipe your face dry,,,
You see what happens when you cry,
Don't cry please
Copyright ©
Dirkj
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2010-12-14 22:59:13]
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Re: Don't Cry
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by Njd1105 on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 10:26:55 AM AEST
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Simple, Great write.
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Re: Don't Cry
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by duff on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 12:11:38 AM AEST
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There is a fairytale feel to this and the imagery is a pleasure to take in. Well done.
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