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Lost in Darkness
Contributed by
allie_07
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Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 09:52:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Beginnings bring curiosity,
endings create a monstrosity.
Naive little girl, what was i thinking?
you can break my heart without even blinking.
But with that first dance..
I gave you a chance,
And now darkness is caving in all around me,
the hurt to come i did not foresee.
My heart immediately breaking,
you've become nothing but history in the making.
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allie_07
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2010-12-14 21:52:04]
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Re: Lost in Darkness
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by Zeberdee on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 10:26:33 PM AEST
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| Good piece of poetry, uncomplicated and simple. |
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Re: Lost in Darkness
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by Dirkj on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 11:21:32 PM AEST
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| Yep i must agree, i like plain and easy to read poetry, well done you have done just that |
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Re: Lost in Darkness
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by hacktastic on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 01:34:28 AM AEST
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What an awesome last line:
"you've become nothing but history in the making"
Well done. I hope you soon overcome the hurt that inspired that poem. |
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Re: Lost in Darkness
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by BeautyKiller on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 05:17:30 PM AEST
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| cruel. but entertaining. i love it. sorry for your feelings. it's happened to me (unfortunately) a lot. just f all the haters ,, espcially exs n keep living your life. don't let 'em bring you down |
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Re: Lost in Darkness
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 04:32:28 PM AEST
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| I've read your posts,your writing is so honest and to the point with a great flow,and you've captured how you can think your partner is one thing but soon becomes someone completely different. |
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