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A Quick Release
Contributed by
williwycombe
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 01:10:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Red rising, swelling, numbing, nulifying, incomprehensible.
Sense of simmering, lapping waves
against a helpless shore.
Never knowing, to-ing and fro-ing,
a slave to a vice clamped deep inside.
Watching, talking, listening and
hoping for the steady release that one day might come.
Copyright ©
williwycombe
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2010-12-14 13:10:39]
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Re: A Quick Release
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by theunknown on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 01:15:40 PM AEST
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i know where this comes from and for me this day hasnt come, but great write it really shows the struggle some of us are going through
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Re: A Quick Release
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 12:20:47 AM AEST
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You've captured well an emotion that I consider very difficult to describe, because it seems that emotion has a lot of deep layers to it, yet your words worked well here. I can definitely relate to your personal and unsettled seething. To be frank, I don't know where I'd be without that little speck of hope (which you mentioned) that someday everything will turn around. But when that glorious day does come, it'll all be worth it.
take care
-K.Z.
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