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YOU MAKE ME FEEL
Contributed by
chrisdavid
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Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 01:14:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When I am down
And I am left so broken
You pick me up
With gentle words spoken
There's no fear when I can hold you tightly
With you here, the light will never darken
You make me feel
That I can swim the ocean
You make me feel
That I can fight the storm
You are all that I have ever needed
With you I feel so safe and warm
Copyright ©
chrisdavid
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2010-12-14 01:14:02]
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Re: YOU MAKE ME FEEL
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by Anbarean on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 01:24:43 AM AEST
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short, simple, lovely and a great one
Takecare
Anbarean |
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Re: YOU MAKE ME FEEL
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 03:43:59 AM AEST
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| Warm heartfelt and genuine lovely write x |
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Re: YOU MAKE ME FEEL
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by RowenM on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 08:01:35 AM AEST
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Great poem.
Short and simple and straightforward!! |
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Re: YOU MAKE ME FEEL
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 08:51:43 AM AEST
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AHHH SWEET,
GOOD STUFF. |
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Re: YOU MAKE ME FEEL
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by Dirkj on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 02:32:02 AM AEST
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| i like poetry where you don't need a dictionary to read it. i like it, well done |
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