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You Are My Never Ending Dream.
Contributed by
Anbarean
on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 12:29:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Darkness spread all over the sky, night is up
My eyes are getting heavy, I can’t stay up
I slumber, I dream, you are the only dream I dream
You are my never ending dream
Daylight illuminates the world, breaks the dark
I wake up with a smile, with birds chirp and dogs bark
I start my chores, I think of you, there I go daydream
You are my never ending dream
Dawn takes a trip to sunset, bringing back your reflection
You rule my heart and you are my only one deliberation
You cast a spell on me; I’m into you, no need of manifestation
You are one dream I ever dream
You are my never ending dream
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Anbarean
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2010-12-14 00:29:17]
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Re: You Are My Never Ending Dream.
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by scottstone on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 01:03:08 AM AEST
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| nicely written |
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Re: You Are My Never Ending Dream.
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by Rasberry on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 03:00:04 AM AEST
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| Nice. |
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Re: You Are My Never Ending Dream.
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by RowenM on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 08:02:16 AM AEST
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We always dream about them. =$
Nice work, can totally relate to it! |
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Re: You Are My Never Ending Dream.
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by ammar on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 08:58:56 AM AEST
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Your poem has fine imagery. And I really like the way you've structured it.
Keep up the good work, Anbarean.
Peace
Ammar |
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Re: You Are My Never Ending Dream.
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by Nobleclint on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 01:04:40 AM AEST
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| I love the dream, your imagery is so real. Keep it up |
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Re: You Are My Never Ending Dream.
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by huwbeauty on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 05:29:40 AM AEST
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| Lovely write,it's amazing how someone can completely take over your life.well structured with good imagery. |
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Re: You Are My Never Ending Dream.
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by me_me on
Sunday, 29th January 2012 @ 08:08:53 AM AEST
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| nice work. keep it up |
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