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Fly
Contributed by
allie_07
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Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 09:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Mysterious eyes,
hidden behind lies.
Truth unknown,
but still i feel at home.
Nightmares became reality,
why did you doubt me?
Suddenly i am drifting,
spirits no longer lifting.
Lead astray,
now its time to fly away,
leave this place,
with a smile on my face.
Copyright ©
allie_07
... [
2010-12-13 21:06:32]
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Re: Fly
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by JeremySolo on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 10:11:47 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking :) |
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Re: Fly
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by Anbarean on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 11:47:47 PM AEST
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nice but sad...but a good one
Takecare
Anbarean |
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Re: Fly
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by RowenM on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 08:04:04 AM AEST
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I loved it.
And the way you ended it i think it's pretty clever.
Good work!! |
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