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Memories
Contributed by
allie_07
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Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 08:56:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Thoughts racing,
you were the one I was chasing.
Love, honesty, and affection,
turns hate, lies, and rejection.
In the beginning our love was flaunted,
this fate is not what I wanted.
The truth came out, pierced my heart just like a bullet,
love never existed, you were only full of it.
Left in the dark, my life became shaded,
all the memories slowly faded.
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2010-12-13 20:56:51]
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Re: Memories
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by JeremySolo on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 10:16:55 PM AEST
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| Wow this one really hits home for me... I've been there! |
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Re: Memories
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by Anbarean on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 11:54:13 PM AEST
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Ohh its heartbreaking and sad.
"The truth came out, pierced my heart just like a bullet"
very nicly written.
takecare
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Re: Memories
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 08:56:16 AM AEST
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Emotional Torture is the worst experience
Well Done |
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