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Unity Creates a Complete Truth
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 08:01:48 PM in AEST
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abstract
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How thin is it, this ice we skate?
Tempted by our unknown fates,
To break the ice and seal our destiny,
Frozen hands…searching for sweet ecstasy,
We grasp for love, and fight our hate,
We mold ourselves into hard shapes,
The truth it slides between our fingers,
But just like sand… a remainder lingers,
The tiny bit of truth you see,
Is just enough to set you free,
We slip, we slide, we come undone,
But in the end… we are all one.
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deusdeira
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2010-12-13 20:01:48]
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Re: Unity Creates a Complete Truth
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by JeremySolo on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 10:18:33 PM AEST
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Re: Unity Creates a Complete Truth
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by Anbarean on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 11:59:55 PM AEST
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The tiny bit of truth you see,
Is just enough to set you free,
I love this poem and these 2 lines are awesome.
and your last line is very true too that in the end we all are one.
Great poem, I like it.
Takecare
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