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She loves me, She loves me not.
Contributed by
xHeathenx
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Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 03:59:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Now you sit alone.
Asking does s/he still love me?
Well yes, I still do.
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xHeathenx
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2010-12-13 03:59:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: She loves me, She loves me not.
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 11:29:45 AM AEST (User
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I first read this yesterday. It gave me a smile, so I thought I'd revisit it.
I like how you wrote this from both points of view, and then directly responded at the end. Nicely done.
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