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Sheer Silence
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 03:06:02 AM in AEST
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Inside my head there is a space,
Where feelings do disparate,
Where anger cannot touch my mind,
And fear… I leave it far behind,
A calm and centered side of me,
That very few can truly see,
Is hidden deep inside my head,
My feelings and my thoughts are shed,
The tangled skein inside my brain,
I always thought would be my bane,
Is nothing but a distant glow,
Serenity and peace do flow,
And deep inside this frozen time,
I have found a world sublime.
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deusdeira
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2010-12-13 03:06:02] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Sheer Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Saturday, 18th December 2010 @ 06:47:02 PM AEST (User
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This idea behind this poem is amazing and I like how you have written everything out. Finding peace of mind and being able to use that is something great and this was a nice piece of writing.
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Re: Sheer Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by shereal_14 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2010 @ 06:55:17 PM AEST (User
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I can honestly say that no, I haven't ever had such a strong peace of mind as described by this poem, but surely I will one day. Great write, by the way. Keep up the good work!!!
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