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He Sent Me The Winter Breeze.
Contributed by
anbarean
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Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:52:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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He return back again after a season
The flowers bloom and butterflies dance
The moon brighten and stars lighten
I then love myself, I love to smile
He loves my wet hair, my hazel eyes
I then love to dress myself just for him
I start to believe once again in love,
I start to believe once again in worship
Then I start to believe again in devotion
There is no love as I have with me now
But this is what I thought that I have
It was just an open eye dream that I saw
He came, he met, and then he left
Flowers died, butterflies cried
My heart ached, hazel eyes cried
Seasons changed again from autumn to winter
Then I heard a sound and a swish, he’s back again
I rush, I run, I hurry and I open the door
There was no one just the wind, the snow and me
I stand, I close my eyes and the wind whispered,
“He couldn’t come, but he sent you this winter breeze”
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Re: He Sent Me The Winter Breeze.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:57:12 AM AEST
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I am guessing that English is not your first language and with that, that makes this even more respectable that you still give it a great effort. There is beauty and there is pain in it. I feel them both.
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Re: He Sent Me The Winter Breeze.
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by RowenM on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 11:05:52 AM AEST
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Though i had to read it twice to actually get something out of it, i still think it is a great work.
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Re: He Sent Me The Winter Breeze.
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 02:39:49 AM AEST
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| There's a real warmth running through this, I think reflecting the heart of the writer, and great imagery to reflect the sadness and pain as I can imagine just the breeze against a tear stained face of anticipation.well written |
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Re: He Sent Me The Winter Breeze.
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by whitt on
Wednesday, 16th February 2011 @ 12:58:41 PM AEST
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i love the 5th stanza the most for some reason :P but in general its a lovely lovely poem !
-Whittley |
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