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Love or Chemistry
Contributed by
hacktastic
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Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:45:48 AM in AEST
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Do you call it Love or chemistry?
It is in our hands and on our hearts.
I see how your eyes sparkle when I look at you.
Your lips, thrilled and hungry as mine touch yours,
taste of sweet affection and desire.
Hear the laughter when we are together
I imagine your voice, your touch, your scent, your mouth,
All sweet, soft and lovely - just as you are.
Reach for my hand and hold my heart.
You kiss my lips and thrill my soul.
You call me "love" and I am yours,
I am yours.
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hacktastic
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2010-12-13 00:45:48]
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Re: Love or Chemistry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:53:12 AM AEST
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I really like it and actually would not change a thing. I also like the way you repeat the last line.
Thanks and  to YPDC,
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Re: Love or Chemistry
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by Anbarean on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:59:49 AM AEST
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beautiful writing...Love or chemistry.....very nice..
I like when you write"Reach for my hand and hold my heart"
Head over heel in love...very well done hope you write more like that so we can read and have great time reading it.
Takecare
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Re: Love or Chemistry
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by ming on
Wednesday, 29th December 2010 @ 01:22:28 PM AEST
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I'm really a pretty jaded oldster...but I agree. That one line POPS!
'Reach for my hand and hold my heart.'
Keep writing. :)
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