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My Lois Lane
Contributed by
JeremySolo
on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 10:03:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She looks at me as just a friend
No idea how much I adore her
Does she know I couldn't live without her,
that I'd do anything for her?
I go a day without hearing her voice
and think that I could die
But before I even finish the thought
shes on the other line
Can you read my mind?
I cant read yours. I wish I knew what you were thinking
you say that I'm your best friend
but I sometimes wonder if you even notice me
You make me feel like I'm Clark Kent
Your definitely my Lois Lane
“He's such a good friend but I couldn't date him”
Things aren't always so plain.
If only you could scratch the surface
and see the Superman lying beneath
And not worry about the superficial things
that won't make you complete
Love's not about the physical
or the nickles or the dimes
it's the connection you feel when you realize you've found
the one you'll be with for all time
The one you know will love you
take care of you
protect you
never leave you
It's not the guy with the money
Its not the guy with the body
Its not the guy with the job
It's me. Just me.
And until you realize that
I'll be by your side
The Clark Kent to your Lois Lane
Copyright ©
JeremySolo
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2010-12-12 22:03:57]
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Re: My Lois Lane
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by UAnwar on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 10:43:40 PM AEST
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Very intriguing poetry,
We all go through these emotions within our lives and you have managed to encapsulate them perfectly with the analogy of Clark Kent :)
The fourth stanza was most moving.
Thank You
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Re: My Lois Lane
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 10:57:06 PM AEST
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aahh very lovely poem...its not a man with this or that, its just me....
Great poem with great love
Takecare
Anbarean |
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Re: My Lois Lane
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by hacktastic on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:53:34 AM AEST
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Nice work. I really like it a lot. You do a great job expressing your feelings of what you want and feel. I also like the use of the superhero duality.
This may go without saying, but don't ever show it to her (unless you end up having a very open relationship with her). In my opinion, poetry of love will get you further than writings on confusion and frustration. Once you have that open, accepting relationship, then there is time and room to show her what you wrote.
But, as it stands on it's own, good job! |
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