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Love sucks
Contributed by
Nobleclint
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Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 09:15:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Behold the mess you have made of me. Now peasants see me and spit. At my sight other creatures take to their heels. I am only but a shadow of ruins, you wounded me and left me to rot. I loved you wit all my might but you reciprocated with respite,gave you my heart on a saucer of gold only for you to stab it with a knife unknown. I thought love was sweet,kind,protective,patient,picturesque,tenacious...until I tasted of it's venegar and now I know better. all now left of me are but the chaffs of my broken pieces and I wish I neva fell in love in this wicked world!
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Re: Love sucks
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 11:01:54 PM AEST
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nice but pain,
great poem but touchy,
awesome writing but sadness in it too
Takecare
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Re: Love sucks
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by Cocoxx on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 12:30:22 PM AEST
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| Different, but very touching and great poem! |
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Re: Love sucks
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by unknown_utopia on
Tuesday, 14th December 2010 @ 08:59:15 AM AEST
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Sucks having a hole in your soul,
I dig the way this flows. |
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Re: Love sucks
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2010 @ 02:03:35 AM AEST
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| Not bad, I like it for the most part. Try to clean it up into stanzas tho. It's always harder to read a paragraph. |
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