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Isn't It Unbelievable
Contributed by
JohnnyFallen
on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 07:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Isn't it unbelievable?
You broke my heart, I told you all of my past
You shattered it, like a moment at last
You breathed it in, and exhaled so fast
Isn't unbelievable?
You don't need me, and I don't need you
You don't want me, hurts to know that's true
You don't care about me, breaks me in two
Isn't it unbelievable?
I loved you, now I care less
Of where you are, you made me feel like a mess
Looking back, I regret our caress
Drowning in my tears
Kill me with my fears
Please deafen my ears
Isn't it unbelievable?
I live as if I'm dead, walking in the cold
I look onto you in dread, my screams getting old
You're deceiving has been fed, soon my story will unfold
Isn't it unbelievable?
You apologized and I forgave
I'm neutralized in a lonely cave
Feeling mortalized with wounds I cannot bathe
Isn't it unbelievable?
You inflected a scar I cannot heal
Now feeling far, it cannot be real
My heart trapped in tar, you cannot feel
Suicide I do not dare to try
Even if you don't care to cry
Sweated blood drips from my hair and I sigh
Isn't it unbelievable?
The depression of it all?
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JohnnyFallen
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2010-12-12 19:05:50]
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Re: Isn't It Unbelievable
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 08:48:52 PM AEST
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Oh yes it is unbelievable..for the beautiful way of expressing....and rhyming as well
very good one
takecare
Anbarean |
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Re: Isn't It Unbelievable
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by Nobleclint on
Monday, 13th December 2010 @ 09:47:14 PM AEST
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| While readin I felt your lyrics like reality,woah it's truly unbelievable! |
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