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love lost
Contributed by
julian
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Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 03:40:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A love lost in time
from the sin that are mine
caused inoccents to die
the moment i relized these lips
well never touch yours
is the moment my soul
was for ever lost
Copyright ©
julian
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2010-12-11 03:40:27]
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Re: love lost
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by MiaPeterson on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 04:47:55 AM AEST
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| Very apologetic and very brief, but I think you should have made it longer, it's too beautiful to be so short, although I understand a lot from what you wrote. Great job! :) |
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Re: love lost
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by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 07:30:49 AM AEST
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| Hm not sure if I'm picturing this correctly, or in the way you intended, but I'm seeing it as someone who did something wrong, e.g., murder, and they have to go to prison say...for life sentence... and they realize when they don't have the chance to see their loved one, then they're truly lost. |
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Re: love lost
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by Anbarean on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 10:18:07 PM AEST
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short but deep love it
Takecare
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