|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
Simplicity
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 07:57:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
|
Simply existing,
meditating, not thinking,
simple, yet complex
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2010-12-10 19:57:11] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Simplicity
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 08:48:12 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Nice.
Blessings,
emy |
|
|
Re: Simplicity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Anbarean on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 10:40:11 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
woooow very short, nice rhyming and complet too
great efforts
Take care
Anbarean |
|
|
Re: Simplicity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 11:58:26 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I love the way your mind designs another thought...a pondering if you will, into a simple yet complex haiku. It seems to state how you...or the human by nature can be yet so simple and simultaneously form or create the complex with so few words.
|
|
|
Re: Simplicity
(User Rating: 1 ) by xHeathenx on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 01:02:20 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I was unaware of the fact that you can sum up a person in so few of words. |
|
|
Re: Simplicity
(User Rating: 1 ) by ming on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 10:02:46 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very Buddah-like. Great read.
ming |
|
|
Re: Simplicity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Njd1105 on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 11:15:58 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Yess...Awesome |
|
|
Re: Simplicity
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Sunday, 12th December 2010 @ 08:46:50 PM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
This is very cool. Intricate and complex. It's really great.
duff |
|
|
|