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When I married you.
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 03:31:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I don't think I know my own mind anymore,
I think I know why, it's not mine it's yours,
You've imprinted on me, 'til I don't believe,
My own principals.
I don't think I know my own kind anymore,
They're not my friends, not mine they're yours,
You've detached me, from who I should be,
Why so influential.
There's not much of me left inside,
When I married you I began to die,
Now distinguished and free,alone with me,
Still not conventional.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-10 03:31:26]
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Re: When I married you.
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by Ambivalence on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 05:00:41 PM AEST
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There's many sides to this kind of event,
and it's the kind of topic I always ponder.
I think it just depends what you're
willing to go through with or without anyone.
But I don't think you need someone else's
character to accentuate your own,
esp. when in a relationship.
I enjoyed your poem, brief yet meaningful.
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: When I married you.
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by Anbarean on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 08:39:40 PM AEST
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wow you wrote it very nicely...I do understand this feeling and the way it goes and you write it very beautifully.
Take care
Anbarean |
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