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Losing Me
Contributed by
whitt
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Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:00:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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i think im losing you
its too hard to endure
i dont know what to do
its becoming unsure
when a risk comes around
you replace me with a new
i fade to your background
and you fade from mine too
i want to know your excuse
why do you forget im here
your imagination is so loose
i might as well disappear
i wonder what you'll do when
im neither here nor there
i bet you'll want me then
i had promised to always care
some promises can disintegrate
they dissolve just like time
maybe it just wasnt our fate
abandoning friendship is a crime
what else could i do
im always your last pick
but no more im through
you better think quick
its either me and the years
or the others and the fights
you can make all your sneers
im about to turn off the lights
i thought i was losing you
finally i stepped into reality
you wont agree that its true
but the fact is you're losing me
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whitt
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2010-12-09 21:00:35]
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Re: Losing Me
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:10:20 PM AEST
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aaawww so pain in words but you know the way you think and put them together that makes you # 1
I hope things will be OK and bringhtness will be there for you
Take care
Anbarean |
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Re: Losing Me
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 09:56:21 PM AEST
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Sad but a great write.
I hate it when some one takes me for granted.
Keep up the good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Losing Me
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by MiaPeterson on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 04:53:47 AM AEST
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| I get what you're going through, but I think you should e-mail your friend this to your friend. She has to be moved by these wonderful words! |
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Re: Losing Me
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by hungarianhaze on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 08:10:32 PM AEST
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I feel you on this one! I had this happen with my Best friend ..its a shame..how things like that can happen..
Good luck in the future |
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