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Appreciating Life
Contributed by
2bpositive
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Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 07:55:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The sun will shine, and the clouds will rain
these winds will blow, and love will yet feign
the eye will see, and the heart will crave
the body will sin, and sin will enslave
The baby will crawl, and the boy will walk
the man will run, and love will soon talk
love's burning desire, but a fleeting fire
age overcomes, desires quickly retire
The old man now stooped over
memories have but faded away
that life once full of living, alas
sitting in solitude, nothing but decay
So in youth, don't ever miss the chance
never stop dreaming, a time for romance
the days are shadows, years will soon disappear
don't miss these opportunities when you're young
just because of this word called fear
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Re: Appreciating Life
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by Anbarean on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:40:35 PM AEST
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wow you write a very awsome poem, and put magic through your words a very true thing you express and I am with the thinking and I do realize it.
so perfect one love it
I have read it 2..3 times
Thank you for writting and sharing such a wonderful piece of writing
Take care
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Re: Appreciating Life
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by duff on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 08:50:42 PM AEST
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You are so dead on with this write. People have no one to blame but themselves if they are too afraid to live and grab the opportunities that stand in front of them. Great message and refreshing to read. Well done.
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Re: Appreciating Life
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 10:46:13 PM AEST
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"the eye will see, and the heart will crave
the body will sin, and sin will enslave"
The highlight of the peom! Very nicely done... |
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Re: Appreciating Life
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Thursday, 6th January 2011 @ 06:51:27 AM AEST
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| So true! It's sad to just sit back and let life pass you by. A lot of people have to learn this the hard way. GREAT poem! |
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Re: Appreciating Life
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by deusdeira on
Tuesday, 9th August 2011 @ 03:17:53 AM AEST
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| I do so love your writing. This poem really speaks the truth. Never give in to fear. What a great message and inspiration! |
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