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Take My Breath Away
Contributed by
jeepz
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Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 04:16:25 PM in AEST
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The first time I saw your face you took my breath away
Now it's 35 years later and I'm feeling the same way
I was always the shy one, and really not
your type, so feeling insecure I just kept quite
The last time I saw you, I really don't recall
My memorie is failing me now, could it have been the fall
We have traveled different directions, we chose our own path
(need to come up with soemthing here)
Fate brought us together today, and again, you took my breath away
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This is my first attempt at poetry, it's not finished as you can see, it was inspired by Pam, the only time I have been a victim of "Love at First Site"
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2010-12-08 16:16:25]
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Re: Take My Breath Away
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by emystar on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 04:14:19 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Really good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Take My Breath Away
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 11:37:04 PM AEST
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| I could have sworn I left a comment here...maybe I'm going crazy. Anyway, welcome to YPDC |
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