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Delirium
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 07:52:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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To miss a loved one, to challenge the vacant
To suspect that this is all an illusion
No dad’s love, no loved one’s presence,
Delirium fevered, tossed and obsessive
I swat at my realities turning skeletons
Incessant fears, they raise their dark hoods
They get kaleidoscopic in my matted hair
I am just another pair of eyes, stalking the void
These walls mutter their raging spells on me
Their silent screams drown what I have saved
I have screeching nails scouring down my sleep
Is all been so long, since his dark death
Thorns on torture, I still look for his body
Where do I put away all my love for him?
His life got over when he wanted out
Some flowers they bloom unsung and unfound
Copyright ©
Sasha
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2010-12-08 07:52:25]
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Re: Delirium
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by duff on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 01:06:10 PM AEST
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The emotional pain and hurt is captured very well in this piece. A heart full of sorrow searching for a release while the mind wanders confused. Great lines and very fluid.
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Re: Delirium
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by unknown_utopia on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 08:36:19 PM AEST
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Emotional Torture rules in this write
I dig it
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