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A little rain
Contributed by
shelby
on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 12:03:41 AM in AEST
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oops
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I thought of you again today
once more you silenty crept in
and rested inside my thoughts
then left once more with the wind.
Decemember rains began to fall
the wind tossed dead branches around.
A storm oh yes a storm
kind of like the one inside my heart.
I walked for a while in the wind and rain
it began to sting my skin.
Watching dead leaves swirl from ground to sky
listening to the howling haunted wind.
I thought of you again today
then in the winds those thoughts softly drifted....away
a storm oh yes a raging Decemember storm
stiring with my heart.......
a little rain mixed with my day
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shelby
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2010-12-08 00:03:41]
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Re: A little rain
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by duff on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 10:52:47 AM AEST
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The imagery you used is excellent and there is a haunting feeling to your words. You painted a storm beautifully and this was a pleasure to read.
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Re: A little rain
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th December 2010 @ 08:19:18 PM AEST
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I absolutely love this poem, especially the very first stanza. It also sort of reminded me of something that happened at work last night but I'll save the rest of that for a pm on another day.
Great work, Michelle! |
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Re: A little rain
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by deusdeira on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 10:51:36 AM AEST
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| I absolutely LOVE this piece. I can feel the intensity and the storm on my stinging skin, and the storm in my heart. :) |
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Re: A little rain
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by Nonefound on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 02:51:20 AM AEST
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| I like that well written |
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Re: A little rain
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by T-Bear on
Saturday, 25th December 2010 @ 10:05:35 AM AEST
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| I feel your pain in the piece... |
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Re: A little rain
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by PoetMasterDani on
Tuesday, 19th April 2011 @ 07:00:18 AM AEST
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| I really liked it. great emotion behind it all :) great work |
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