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You Will One Day Love Me.
Contributed by
Anbarean
on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 12:28:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I run my whole life after you for me
I was so mesmerized and I was so tempted
I never looked at myself and you make me waited
Now time is running and it’s getting late
I am telling myself he’s no more my fate
I am growing older and passing these days
I send my love so many times and you were aware
You always knew how much I did love and care
But what holds you, why you’re still not here?
One day you will get a note from a stranger
That she who loves you that she who waited for years
That last breath on which your name was on
Has taken away forever and now she’s gone
You will hold the wall and think what you done
But it will be too late as my soul has gone
You will come and cry near my casket
You will touch my hand, my hair and my face
Your tear will drop and will touch my skin
That drop will put my soul to ease no sin
That you came to love me, though it’s too late
Then you’ll remember that I always say this to you
One day you will love me but then I’ll not be there for you
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Anbarean
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2010-12-07 00:28:38]
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Re: You Will One Day Love Me.
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by Priyashrav on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 01:53:05 AM AEST
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Good effort! It takes skill to write a love poem,and tat too with a beautiful rhyme scheme.
Loved it. |
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Re: You Will One Day Love Me.
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by huwbeauty on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 06:01:51 AM AEST
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| very moving. |
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Re: You Will One Day Love Me.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 11:50:41 AM AEST
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Sad but unfortunately this happens too frequent.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: You Will One Day Love Me.
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 11:23:41 PM AEST
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Touching write. I felt you heart and soul in this one. Well done.
Michelle |
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Re: You Will One Day Love Me.
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by LovelChelsea on
Thursday, 20th January 2011 @ 08:56:23 PM AEST
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| You've seemed to have stirred something inside me. I'm almost in tear's actually... Thank you ( I mean it) (: |
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Re: You Will One Day Love Me.
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by whitt on
Saturday, 5th February 2011 @ 09:57:17 PM AEST
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i know someone im like that with...i felt like crying when u started the funeral part its got so much heart in its words...thanks for the read:)
-Whittley |
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Re: You Will One Day Love Me.
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by me_me on
Sunday, 29th January 2012 @ 08:18:48 AM AEST
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woow. that was so touching and amazing
loved it
thank u |
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