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MOmmy

Contributed by notgoodenough on Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 04:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I can't breathe
I'm all bent out of shape
These tears falling out of pure
frustration
I wanna scream
flip my hair around
In the shower, water flying around
Favorite song on the radio
Helping me release
Is that bad?
I don't know
It's how sad
Stopping (pause).... Eye lashes fluttering
Water dripping from my head
Looking around, water everywhere
Tears of happiness drop down
My cheeks
Happy to cry
Sad to be happy
Mommy listen to me
I sound crazy
Are they going to find this
Put me somewhere I don't belong
Mommy, Mommy save me now
Love me kindly
love me dearly
Love me more than anything
This song reminds me of you momma
You've made me cry, You've told me lies
I rub back to you everytime
I may cause everything. But can you still run and get me like daddy did
Mommy, play daddy's part when i need it
I no you want to when he's ***** off at me
Who do I cry to?
Do you cry to the wall?
Of you have no shoulder to lean on?
Momma, I want to let you know
That I am comin' home.

Copyright © notgoodenough ... [ 2003-04-21 16:30:00]
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Re: MOmmy (User Rating: 1 )
by norm on Thursday, 8th May 2003 @ 10:04:18 AM AEST
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i keep reading your writes and loving them..

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