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Paradise
Contributed by
TheJMan
on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 12:10:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Our love is a paradise
On an island lost at sea
The wind embracing the water
And dancing with the tree's
No clouds to take our breath away
Always a shelter from the storm
The stars are out all night and day
They watch us and keep us warm
With our own personal beach
Where we lay upon the sand
Nothing could be more perfect
This paradise together, hand and hand
Our love is a paradise
In a beautiful city at night
Locked in our top floor penthouse
Nothing but a view of all those lights
Breathtaking it may be
But to you it can't compare
It's only a perfect moment you see
Because we have it together to share
Dozing off in the love seat
No better name i see fit
Together intertwined
On your cheek a goodnight kiss
Our love is a paradise
A great green forest standing tall
The birds will sing us any song
And in the center a grand waterfall
The branches take us to the top
Where we see the world from above
A garden with beauty that never stops
As it grows so does our love
The trails will take us home
But we end up walking them all day
And when you ask how i feel
There is only one thing i could say
Our Love is A Paradise
Copyright ©
TheJMan
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2010-12-06 00:10:35]
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Re: Paradise
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by duff on
Wednesday, 8th December 2010 @ 01:27:10 PM AEST
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It sounds like you described utopia for two. A wonderful setting to enjoy each other. Beautiful sanctuary to escape from all that is not. A well written piece that takes you away.
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Re: Paradise
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by Njd1105 on
Saturday, 11th December 2010 @ 12:28:29 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. Rhymes are perfect |
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