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Doomed
Contributed by
Nevilleconnie
on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 07:04:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Living in a lonesome world.
A world in which I loath.
I wish for once, a human being,
Can give to me some hope.
A little hope is all I need,
To get me through this life.
I’ve searched and searched for many years,
But all I’ve found were lies.
Lying people everywhere.
There seems to be no break.
All my courage now is gone.
And fear now takes it’s place.
I dream and dream, and dream some more.
But dreams are all I’ve got.
Cause when I wake I see the truth.
The real world is a crock.
I know this poem is far from sweet.
No happy ending looms.
But this is how I’m feeling now.
So lost inside my doom.
Copyright ©
Nevilleconnie
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2010-12-05 19:04:33]
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Re: Doomed
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 07:12:43 PM AEST
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Very true, clear and nice way of your writing and exppressing in a poem.
Love it ....
Takecare
Anbarean |
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Re: Doomed
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by huwbeauty on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 02:32:30 AM AEST
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| Really good,I feel the loneliness and the disappointment with the world. |
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Re: Doomed
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 7th December 2010 @ 11:44:04 PM AEST
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I am glad to see you back.
I relate to this poem so deeply dear friend.
I feel each word and know this pain.
I wish for you peace, I have a tear running down my cheek.
Hugs you tight
Michelle |
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Re: Doomed
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 9th December 2010 @ 01:41:42 PM AEST
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| i love how you expressed yourself in this poem. so i liked every ounce of it. |
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