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Torn
Contributed by
JohnnyFallen
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Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 12:37:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Feeling torn
Tears and blood drip from a thorn
Rain from my eyes
Pain from your lies
Moonlight shines the sky
Stars high
Why can't I fly?
And
Escape the despair
That I well do fare
Within me
Feeling torn
My soul is worn
Now I mourn
Wishing for love to be again born
I await her... whoever she is
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2010-12-05 12:37:54]
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Re: Torn
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 05:53:55 PM AEST
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Rain from my eyes
Pain from your lies
wow its a very nice one though pain and sadness but good write
Keep it up with the good writing
Take care
Anbarean |
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Re: Torn
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by Priyashrav on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 08:48:34 PM AEST
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Short but effectively painful.
You could lengthen it a bit...........
Add different prospectives maybe.Anyway, it's your call!
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Re: Torn
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by mvvenkataraman on
Monday, 6th December 2010 @ 02:55:38 AM AEST
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My dear, love will flower
A kind person will come
To soon embrace you
Giving the needed solace
World is a massive place
There are many noble souls
That day will definitely arrive
In love you will joyfully swim
God is not a sadist
His plans are deep
Please be hopeful
Await bliss with hope. |
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