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Our World of Emotions
Contributed by
2bpositive
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Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 08:24:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This world of emotions, is where we all really live
a place where we take, a place where we give
our experiences differ, due to the preconceptions we hold
only with a discerning heart, would we feel it unfold
Trials and tribulations, most of our days will we see
if we expect to learn and grow, this will have to be
what is our life worth living, could we ever be free
staying trapped in our emotions, unable to agree
To perceive one's true enemy, is not such a big feat
no need for anything special, you don't need to be elite
just a desire for your honesty, and introspection to meet
a realization that without this, you will never be complete
Break down the walls of your heart, to see what's there
another human being like you, yes, maybe your peer
only bias and negativity, has this world made you immune
you failing to recognize, your obligation to commune
Whether black or white, gentile or jew
unity binding our souls, where are those few?
strife and dissension, this confusion does accrue
to a point of tragedy, which always seems to renew
Yet, we all hold this power, this divine power to achieve
but will you choose to change, or forever remain naive
enemy number one, if by now you cannot perceive
with your own ignorance of mind, do you deceive
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2bpositive
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2010-12-05 08:24:24]
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Re: Our World of Emotions
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by Craze on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 10:08:00 AM AEST
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| The poem flowed smoothly it wasn't daring or rough around the edges it was cautioius but potent good write...By the way love ur name! |
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Re: Our World of Emotions
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by Anbarean on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 07:08:50 PM AEST
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Break down the walls of your heart, to see what's there........you failing to recognize, your obligation to commune
I like it and very nicly written....
take care
Anbarean |
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