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Ruth
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 05:56:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I close my eyes,I see you glide,
With grace across the room.
And in my mind, I see your eyes,
Your soul is shining through.
And your sweet voice,I hold inside,
An angel amongst the gloom.
Then there's your smile,how can I deny,
No beauty greater than you.
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2010-12-04 05:56:55] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ruth
(User Rating: 1 ) by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 09:08:09 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful. really wonderful. I love the rhyming pattern and your soft eager words. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Ruth
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jonathon_J_Young on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 09:29:35 AM AEST (User
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simple beauty and great feeling. nice work! |
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