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Dark nights
Contributed by
huwbeauty
on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 05:47:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Opaque are the walls dividing we,
And cruel is the fool berating me,
Dark are the nights,to dark to see.
Paranoia your illumination,
Painted large,
A painful creation,
Nightmare of your imagination,
Troubled are the shadows defining we,
And cold is the soul haunting me,
Dark are the corners,the corners of me.
Thick viscous layers smothering we,
Dead is the man following me,
Stark is the end the end,of me.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-04 05:47:25]
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Re: Dark nights
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by cashfan1 on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 09:10:15 AM AEST
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| Wow! This is dark and very deep indeed, your writing is very readable and I enjoy it very much. |
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Re: Dark nights
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by Jonathon_J_Young on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 09:32:19 AM AEST
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| dark mood with a hint of life being futile. i feel these things a fair bit myself and can relate. nice write. |
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Re: Dark nights
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by JohnnyFallen on
Sunday, 5th December 2010 @ 12:32:55 PM AEST
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| Hmmm... dark, depressing, and deep. I love it. |
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