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Breaking Me Up
Contributed by
Jonathon_J_Young
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Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 09:09:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How could you say it?
You broke my heart.
With every tear passing,
I seem to fall apart.
Is this for the better?
I really just can't tell.
If I go on like this,
I never will get well.
I feel so numb and empty,
I feel as if I'm lost.
Why did you have to do this?
For my heart was the cost.
I'll remember all the good times,
Though I probably should forget.
I'll believe your gone forever,
And live with this regret.
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Jonathon_J_Young
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2010-12-03 21:09:32]
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Re: Breaking Me Up
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by iodinelove on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 10:55:22 PM AEST
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| I personally am of the belief that our tears are how we refrain from falling apart. They are an antiseptic of sorts...to clean the heart or soul or whatever one might choose to call the bundle of emotions our body and mind suffer in love and the loss thereof |
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Re: Breaking Me Up
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by Anbarean on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 11:11:39 PM AEST
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Oh Johnathon...this is a very sad poem but you put feelings in it...
Specially...""I'll believe your gone forever,
and live with this regret""
beautifull
Take care
Anbarean
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Re: Breaking Me Up
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by huwbeauty on
Saturday, 4th December 2010 @ 06:10:32 AM AEST
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| Simply written,but sadness and pain pour from it. |
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