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Living maze
Contributed by
huwbeauty
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Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 02:26:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I think I'm having one of those days,
I'm finding it hard to see through the haze,
I've one thing on my mind,all the time,
My love lost in this living maze,
A labyrinth of false words and meaning,
The perfect place to hide your feelings,
A library of your being,
A million volumes,
I can't read them.
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huwbeauty
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2010-12-02 02:26:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Living maze
(User Rating: 1 ) by duff on
Thursday, 2nd December 2010 @ 12:28:28 PM AEST (User
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An interesting write about the mind and living inside oneself. The mind is an intricate thing that holds our keys and I like the imagery you created. A maze is a great example and this is well written.
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