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gossip girl messed me up
Contributed by
trailmix
on
Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 11:23:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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i stare at a world I once knew so well
Once so vibrant
once so happy
once so inviting
i stare at a world with love, once
i once shared
i once cared
i once belonged
the world i once loved now lost me, i sit outside
no walk i can
no care i do
no love i feel
no pain i loath
darkness carry me over, for the outside i do not want
carry me over
leave me low
leave me lust-less
leave me dirty
give me the shame i deserve
spit on me
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2010-11-30 23:23:53]
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Re: gossip girl messed me up
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by NewGuy on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 07:53:12 AM AEST
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| wow, powerful words. There are times where we all feel left behind by the world. ENjoyeyab le work. Hope you are able to turn it around thanks for sharing |
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Re: gossip girl messed me up
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by Jonathon_J_Young on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 09:35:37 AM AEST
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| i like the format of this and can relate to it. at the same time i wouldn't mind being spat on depending on the circumstance. |
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Re: gossip girl messed me up
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by NightMareShoGun on
Wednesday, 17th October 2012 @ 09:27:01 PM AEST
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| great job |
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