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Light of Love
Contributed by
voice of the silent
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Tuesday, 30th November 2010 @ 11:04:39 PM in AEST
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In my mind she seems to be a lit candle
I don't know how much she can handle
but she burns bright
although surrounded
Engulfed in my mind filling with darkness
How can she bare this
she is the only light
Seemingly overpowered by darkness
but she still shines
I hope she burns bright, I hope she can handle
Being my light
In the darkness of my mind
I used to bask in my dark light
Now with out her to brighten my life
Nothing would feel right
She the only one.
Who can Give me,
The Light of Love
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2010-11-30 23:04:39]
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Re: Light of Love
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by mehuel on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 08:57:01 AM AEST
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| nice flow of emotions, well texted. Love can enlightening.. |
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Re: Light of Love
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by Jonathon_J_Young on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 09:38:49 AM AEST
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| my kind of poem. i have a evil side that gets the best of me, i hope that the right one can save me from myself and make me the person i want to be. |
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Re: Light of Love
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by SilentMuse on
Wednesday, 1st December 2010 @ 07:58:43 PM AEST
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If I am to be your candle then an oddity I must be
For I will burn for you forever
Until you no longer want me |
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Re: Light of Love
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by MusicksPrincessa on
Friday, 3rd December 2010 @ 04:01:47 PM AEST
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| all i can say is WOW |
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